Question

【題目】高三第一次考試成績(jī)單

科目	語(yǔ)文	數(shù)學(xué)	英語(yǔ)	理綜
滿分	150	150	150	300
李強(qiáng)	101	143	95	279

假設(shè)你是李華，以上是你的朋友李強(qiáng)上次考試成績(jī)單。請(qǐng)根據(jù)其成績(jī)單給他寫一封回信。信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。內(nèi)容要求：

1. 簡(jiǎn)單敘述他的學(xué)習(xí)情況；

2. 對(duì)于今后復(fù)習(xí)備考，提出你的建議和意見(jiàn)。

3. 字?jǐn)?shù)約120詞。

參考詞匯：成績(jī)單examination result list; 理綜science subjects;

Dear Li Qiang,

Your letter reached me yesterday. It can be seen obviously from the above examination result list

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Qiang,

Your letter reached me yesterday. It can be seen obviously from the above examination result list that you are excellent at maths and science subjects while your Chinese and English are comparatively weak.

Your maths and science subjects are already good enough, so your aim should be keeping them at present level, making sure they will not drop. It is not worthwhile spending too much time on these subjects.

As for English and Chinese, You must try your best to find out why the marks always stay so low, and then you had better go to the teachers and classmates for advice, so that you can take effective measures to improve your English and Chinese.

There are several months left for you to prepare for the university entrance examinations. I hope you can keep balance all of the subjects and keep up spirits, and at the meantime balance between study and rest. Only in this way can you enter an ideal university.

Wish you success!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于書(shū)信類，根據(jù)提示信息來(lái)給李強(qiáng)寫一封回信。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯遞進(jìn)關(guān)系來(lái)寫。本文寫作時(shí)可以按照他學(xué)習(xí)的情況和以后的具體規(guī)劃進(jìn)行介紹。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如固定結(jié)構(gòu)you had better go to the teachers and classmates for advice,倒裝句Only in this way can you enter an ideal university，被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)It can be seen obviously from the above examination result list that you are excellent at maths and science subjects while your Chinese and English are comparatively weak.句型it is worthwhile ，It is not worthwhile spending too much time on these subjects。此外，文章還使用了大量短語(yǔ)keeping them at present level、try your best to find out、keep balance all of the subjects and keep up spirits、take effective measures等，使語(yǔ)言更加連貫。