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假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李華，你校打算邀請(qǐng)阿里巴巴首席執(zhí)行官馬云來(lái)學(xué)校做一次畢業(yè)典禮演講，請(qǐng)你給馬首席寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的；

2.說(shuō)明演講的具體安排-----時(shí)間：5月30日；地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校操場(chǎng);

主題：怎樣通過(guò)個(gè)人奮斗實(shí)現(xiàn)人生理想；

3.表達(dá)感謝與祝福。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.參考詞匯：畢業(yè)典禮演講 commencement speech

Dear Mayun, CEO of Ali Baba,

My name is Li Hua. I’m a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mayun, CEO of Ali Baba,

My name is Li Hua. I’m a Senior 3 student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to ask you a favor. Would you please come to our school and give us a commencement speech? The speech is scheduled to be given on May 30th on the school playground ,the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams through personal efforts. We are eager to hear you talk about your own experiences and unique views.

I sincerely hope you can take time out of your busy schedule, and I would appreciate it very much if you could come. Thank you in advance and wish you all the best!

I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇典型的書(shū)信類應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作�？忌�在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意目的明確、條理清楚。英文書(shū)信一般由以下六部分組成：信頭、信內(nèi)地址、稱呼、正文、結(jié)尾、簽名。題目已給定大致的格式，另外還要注意結(jié)合主題。

本文開(kāi)篇就用了一個(gè)好的短語(yǔ)ask you a favor，請(qǐng)您幫個(gè)忙，避免了使用常用詞help；第三句的祈使句Would you please顯得謙和有禮；第四句中使用了定語(yǔ)從句the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams through personal efforts，which代替the speech，使得句式非常靈活多變，不會(huì)顯得千篇一律；第五句中短語(yǔ)be eager to的使用也非常恰當(dāng)；第六句I would appreciate it if you could come，虛擬語(yǔ)氣用在這里表示禮貌，客氣；第七句中的in advance（提前）也用的非常好。最后一段使用了look forward to（期待）和at your earliest convenience（在您方便時(shí)）顯示了較好的英語(yǔ)功底，使得整個(gè)書(shū)信格式完整而禮貌。

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