Question

5．下面短文有10處語言錯誤，請?jiān)谟绣e誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^）．并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分
In 1929，three years after his flight over the North Pole，the American explorer，R．E．Byrd，successful flew over the South Pole for the first time．Therefore，at first，Byrd and his men were able to take great many photographs of the mountains that laid below，they soon ran into serious troubles．At one point，it seemed sure that their plane would crash．It could only get over the mountains if it raised to 10，000 feet．Byrd at once ordered his men to throw away two heavy food sacks．The plane was then able to rise and it cleared the mountains by 400 feet．Byrd then knew that he would be able to reach the South Pole which was 300 miles away，for there was no more mountains at sight．The aircraft was able to fly over the endless white plains without difficult．

Answer 1

分析 本文敘述了美國探險(xiǎn)家Byrd在飛越北極三年之后，于1929年又成功地飛越了南極的故事．文章重點(diǎn)講述了Byrd和他的隨從們在飛越南極時，所遭遇的險(xiǎn)情；就在飛機(jī)眼看要墜毀的時候，是Byrd果斷地命令他的隨從們?nèi)拥袅藘蓚�沉重的裝食物的袋子，才使得飛機(jī)得以脫險(xiǎn)．

解答 In 1929，three years after his flight over the North Pole，the American explorer，R．E．Byrd，successful 
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flew over the South Pole for the first time．Therefore，at first，Byrd and his men were able to take∧great 
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many photographs of  the mountains that laid below，they soon ran into serious troubles．At one point，
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it seemed sure that their plane would crash．It could only get over the mountains if itraisedto 10，00               certain                                                                                                     rose  
feet．Byrd at once ordered his men to throw away two heavy food sacks．The plane was then able to rise and it cleared the mountains by 400 feet．Byrd then knew that he would be able to reach the South Pole which was 300 miles away，for there was no more mountainsatsight．The aircraft was able to fly over the endless   
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white plains without difficult．
                               difficulty

1．將successful改為successfully     考查副詞的用法      此處用來修飾動詞flew，故用副詞successfully
2．將Therefore改為Though       考查連詞的用法     therefore"因此"，后接結(jié)果；though"盡管"，引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句；本句的意思是：盡管剛開始，Byrd和他的隨從們拍下了下面許多連綿群山的照片，但是不久，他們就遇到了很大的麻煩；故用Though
3．great 前加a       考查固定短語的用法     固定短語a great many"許多"，用來修飾可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)，此處意為：許多連綿群山的照片；故在great 前加a
4．將laid改為lay     考查動詞詞義辨析     動詞laid是lay的過去式"放"；lay是lie的過去式，"位于"；本句的句意是：位于下面的許多連綿的群山；故用lay
5．將troubles改為trouble    考查固定短語的用法    固定短語run into trouble"遇到麻煩，陷入困境之中"；此處意為：不久，他們就遇到了很大的麻煩；故改為trouble   
6．將sure改為certain       考查形容詞的用法    由于在"It is/seems…that結(jié)構(gòu)中只能用certain，不能用sure；意為：毫無疑問…，肯定…；故用certain
7．將raised改為rose     考查動詞詞義辨析    raised"提高"是及物動詞，后面應(yīng)跟賓語；rose"上升"是不及物動詞，其后不跟賓語；由于此處沒有賓語；故用rose
8．將was改為were        考查主謂一致       由于There be之后是no more mountains （名詞的復(fù)數(shù)）；而此處講述的是1929年Byrd飛越南極時的經(jīng)歷，故用一般過去時were
9．將at改為in       考查固定短語的用法     固定短語in sight"在視野內(nèi)，看得見"；故改為in
10．將difficult改為difficulty    考查名詞的用法     此處用于介詞之后應(yīng)使用名詞；difficult是形容詞；故用名詞difficulty

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