Question

假設(shè)你是李華，最近跟父母去國外旅行時(shí)所居住的旅館服務(wù)不好。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示
給旅館老板寫一封英文投訴信，
l空調(diào)無法關(guān)掉；
2浴室不干凈；
3．晚上周圍噪音很大，且不給更換房間。
4服務(wù)員態(tài)度隨意，漫不經(jīng)心。
注意：l．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．短文須包括所給要點(diǎn)，但不必逐句翻譯；
3可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
4文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，下計(jì)入總詞。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am writing to complain about your hotel service. My parents and I had a terrible stay in
Room 512.
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Looking forward to hearing  from you
Yours faithfully
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about your hotel service. My parents and I had a terrible stay in Room 512.
Firstly, the air-conditioner wouldn’t work. When I asked the staff for help, they said ok. But eventually no one came. Secondly, I found the bathroom rather dirty to bathe in. What was worse, the noise outside at night was so loud we found it hard to fall asleep. I asked to change rooms, but was refused for the reason that the hotel was full. It was surprising that the waiters treated us in a very casual and indifferent manner.
I would like you to refund my money. Unless I get a satisfactory reply, I’ll write to the Consumer Association.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。假設(shè)你是李華，最近跟父母去國外旅行時(shí)所居住的旅館服務(wù)不好。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示：給旅館老板寫一封英文投訴信， l空調(diào)無法關(guān)掉； 2浴室不干凈；3．晚上周圍噪音很大，且不給更換房間。4服務(wù)員態(tài)度隨意，漫不經(jīng)心。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】It was surprising that the waiters treated us in a very casual and indifferent manner. 這里含有一個(gè)主語從句。