Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧), 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。

修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意: 1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him. ”That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】with→on

【2】去掉so

【3】have→has

【4】healthy→health

【5】which→what

【6】paid 后加 a

【7】her→his

【8】step→stepped

【9】picture→pictures

【10】many→much

【解析】

【1】with→on考查介詞。固定句型：spend …on ＋ n．/(in) doing sth

【2】去掉so 考查連詞。這是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，不需要用連詞so

【3】have→has 考查主謂一致。hard work 是不可數(shù)名詞短語(yǔ)，作主語(yǔ)時(shí)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)

【4】healthy→health考查名詞。形容詞性物主代詞后接名詞。Healthy是形容詞

【5】which→what考查表語(yǔ)從句的連接，這是其他老師說(shuō)的，what連接表語(yǔ)從句，做表語(yǔ)從句的賓語(yǔ)

【6】paid 后加 a 考查固定短語(yǔ)。pay a visit to這是固定詞組“拜訪“

【7】her→his 考查代詞。這里指Mr.Johnson的房間，用形容詞性物主代詞his

【8】step→stepped 考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。這是講的昨天下午的事情，用一般過(guò)去式stepped

【9】picture→pictures 考查名詞。some of后面接可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)：Picture改成pictures

【10】many→much 考查固定短語(yǔ)。句意：我理解他想我和我想他一樣。這里表示想念的程度，用much