Question

【題目】假定你是李華，請給在你校做交換生的美國朋友Eric寫封郵件，邀請他參加你校組織的“拾荒慢跑(plogging)”公益活動。內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動的時間、地點(diǎn)；

2.活動的內(nèi)容：慢跑并撿拾路上的垃圾；

3.注意事項：準(zhǔn)備垃圾袋。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Eric,

How is everything going? I am writing to invite you to attend an environmental protection activity held by our school, whose theme is plogging. And the detailed information is as follows.

To protect the environment and enrich students’ school life, this special activity will be held in the Zhongshan Park, from 9a.m to 11a.m next Wednesday. It is mainly about picking up garbage while jogging on the road. All applicants will be divided into 20 groups, and there are 5 students in each group. The first three groups that pick up garbage the most in the limited time will win the first prize. What’s more, all applicants should prepare their garbage bags for the plogging. I know you like running in the morning and you are concerned about the environment, so there is no doubt that you are the right people to sign up.

If you are interested, please reply to me before next Monday. I’m looking forward to your letter.

Yours,

LiHua.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封邀請信，邀請他參加你校組織的“拾荒慢跑(plogging)”公益活動。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總法

要求：1. 活動的時間、地點(diǎn)；

2. 活動的內(nèi)容：慢跑并撿拾路上的垃圾；

3. 注意事項：準(zhǔn)備垃圾袋。

第二步：列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

invite sb.to do sth.；as follows；school life；pick up；divide into；there are；limited time；the first prize；what’s more；garbage bags；in the morning；be concerned about；sign up；look forward to等。

第三步：連詞成句

1. I am writing to invite you to attend an environmental protection activity held by our school, whose theme is plogging.

2. To protect the environment and enrich students’ school life, this special activity will be held in the Zhongshan Park, from 9a.m to 11a.m next Wednesday.

3. It is mainly about picking up garbage while jogging on the road.

4. All applicants will be divided into 20 groups, and there are 5 students in each group.

5. The first three groups that pick up garbage the most in the limited time will win the first prize.

6. I know you like running in the morning and you are concerned about the environment, so there is no doubt that you are the right people to sign up.

7. If you are interested, please rely to me before next Monday.

8. I’m looking forward to your letter.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

and；what’s more；while；so；if等

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改