Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Last Sunday Li Lin, one of my classmates, and I go to a bookstore. At a counter we noticed that the foreigner was talking to a clerk, but the clerk didn’t understand how the foreigner said, So we went up to him and was asked if he needed help in English. After knowing what he real wanted, we took him to the counter which he was looking. He was interesting in Chinese folk music very much, We gave him some advices on what to choose. The foreigner picked some music tapes with your help. He gave his sincere thanks to us and left, satisfied and happily.

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【解析】1.根據(jù)Last Sunday可知句子用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故把go 改成 went。

2.句意：我們注意到一個(gè)外國人正在和店員談話。此處表示泛指，故把the 改成 a。

3.句意：但是店員不明白外國人在說什么。此處是賓語從句，引導(dǎo)詞即起引導(dǎo)作用同時(shí)又做賓語從句的賓語，故把how 改成 what。

4.句意：我們走上去問是否需要用英語幫忙。此處是并列的謂語動(dòng)詞，主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故把was去掉。

5.副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故把real 改成 really。

6.句意：我們把他帶到他正在找的柜臺(tái)。固定詞組：look for尋找，故在looking 后面加上 for。

7.句意：他對中國民歌非常感興趣。故把interesting 改成 interested。

8.因?yàn)?/span>advice是不可數(shù)名詞，故把advices 改成 advice。

9.句意：在我們的幫助下這位外國人挑選了一些音樂錄音帶。故把your 改成 our。

10.句意：感到滿意和高興。此處是形容詞做伴隨狀語，故把happily 改成 happy。