Question

18．假設(shè)以下幾幅圖描繪的是Jim一天內(nèi)所經(jīng)歷的事情，請根據(jù)前三幅圖的順序和內(nèi)容，想象第四幅圖可能的發(fā)展，寫出一個涵蓋所有圖片內(nèi)容并有完整結(jié)局的故事，向�？�"英語園地"投稿．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：crutch（拐杖），give up one's seat（讓座）

Answer 1

分析 本文是圖畫類作文，要求根據(jù)四幅圖的先后順序及所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)用英文寫一篇短文，介紹Jim在一天內(nèi)經(jīng)歷的事情和他自身態(tài)度的變化．在寫作時，以第三人稱為主．時態(tài)以一般過去時為主．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，抓住細(xì)節(jié)按順序安排好材料．
重要短語：go to play basketball （去打籃球）； rush hour （交通擁擠時間，上下班高峰時間）；selfish（自私的）；priority seats（優(yōu)先座位）；give up（放棄）；pretend to do（假裝做某事）；
                think twice（再三考慮）； however（然而）；hurt his ankle（傷了他的腳踝）；walk with a crutch（用拐杖走路）；reflect on （反省，回顧）．
高分句型：1．Jim is rather selfish，so he didn't think twice about taking one of the priority seats．
                 在這個句子中運(yùn)用了動名詞形式作介詞about的賓語．
                 2．He hurt his ankle while playing basketball and he had to walk with a crutch，standing for long periods  painfully．
                  句中的while playing…是一種省略"主語+be動詞"的做法，相當(dāng)于從句"while he is playing basketball"．standing for long periods  painfully是現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語．
                 3．This experience  made Jim reflect on  his behavior in the morning．
                 本句中的made是使役動詞，后面跟省to不定式，即make sb do sth．

解答 Jim is a high school student，and a classmate of mine．Last sunday he went to play basketball by bus．It was the rush hour and the bus was  crowded．Jim is rather selfish，so he didn't think twice about taking one of the priority seats（高分句型一）．Even when an elderly passenger was standing nearby，he didn't give up the seat and pretends not to notice them．（圖1）
However，something that happened later changed him．He hurt his ankle while playing basketball and he had to walk with a crutch，standing for long periods painfully（高分句型二）（圖2）．On the way back home，he was sad to find that he had to stand on the bus．Luckily，a girl in one of the priority seats noticed  him．She quickly stood up to give up her seat to Jim（圖3）．This experience  made Jim reflect on  his behavior in the morning（高分句型三）．He thought he would never be selfish again!（圖4．發(fā)揮想象）

點(diǎn)評 寫好這類圖表作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，運(yùn)用所掌握的英語知識，圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．