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5．假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter 不久前參加了他們學校的漢語學習小組．由于感覺學習起來困難很大，他打算退出．請你根據(jù)以下要點用英語給他寫一封信．內容包括：
1．勸他不要放棄；
2．給他一些學習漢語的建議．
注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
2、可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you have joined the Chinese Learning Group in your school．It is common that you will have difficulty in learning Chinese at first．（高分句型一）I hope you won't give up．
Learning Chinese well will be very important and useful for you．It can help you learn more about Chinese history and culture．Moreover，it can help you communicate with Chinese people better．To learn Chinese well，you need to practice speaking it as often as possible，especially with native speakers．（高分句型二）In addition，listening to Chinese songs or learning to sing them is a good way to memorize Chinese words．（高分句型三）Why not have a try？If there is anything I can do to help you，do tell me．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter 不久前參加了他們學校的漢語學習小組．由于感覺學習起來困難很大，他打算退出．請你根據(jù)以下要點用英語給他寫一封信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：勸他不要放棄；給他一些學習漢語的建議．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：have difficulty in 在做某事方面有困難；give up放棄；Moreover而且；communicate with溝通，交流；In addition另外；
It is common that you will have difficulty in learning Chinese at first．（高分句型一）
To learn Chinese well，you need to practice speaking it as often as possible，especially with native speakers．（高分句型二）
In addition，listening to Chinese songs or learning to sing them is a good way to memorize Chinese words．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       I'm glad to hear that you have joined the Chinese Learning Group in your school． It is common that you will have difficulty in learning Chinese at first．（高分句型一）I hope you won't give up．
       Learning Chinese well will be very important and useful for you．It can help you learn more about Chinese history and culture．Moreover，it can help you communicate with Chinese people better．To learn Chinese well，you need to practice speaking it as often as possible，especially with native speakers．（高分句型二）In addition，listening to Chinese songs or learning to sing them is a good way to memorize Chinese words．（高分句型三）Why not have a try？If there is anything I can do to help you，do tell me．
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                      Li hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．