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第四部分：書面表達（25分）
你是在校大學生李華，暑假前夕有一天在學校的告示板上看到下面一則尋找家教的廣告，你打算按要求寫一封信去應聘并留下自己的聯(lián)絡電話:88866907
WANTED:TUTOR FOR TWO SENIOR3 BOYS
Requirement:
Good communicational skills
Good at all Senior High subjects
Freshman and above（大學一年級以上）
Enjoy sharing experience with others
Work time: 9:00, Mon. Fri. July 10 to Aug 10
Payment: 100 yuan per hour
Mr Allen Lee
寫作內容應包括以下要點:
1. 說明自己有資格擔任此家庭教師，是學校的優(yōu)秀學生，各科成績優(yōu)秀
2. 有充分系統(tǒng)的備考資料，深刻的備考高考體會樂意與他人分享
3. 自己在校時積極參與各項活動，善于與他人相處
參考詞匯：
優(yōu)秀學生one of the top ten students
高考備考資料materials for the preparation of the College Entrance Examination
注意：
可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；2．詞數(shù)120左右；
3．信的開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入詞數(shù)中
Dear Mr. Allen Lee,
I am writing to ask for the tutor job for the two Senior 3 boys.
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I look forward to your reply at 88866907
Yours sincerely,
Li Hu

Answer 1

Possible versions:
Dear Mr Allen Lee,
I am writing to ask for the tutor job for the two Senior 3 boys.
As a college student, I’m sure that I have all the right qualification needed for the job.
Firstly, I am proud to say that I am one of the top ten students in my grade, and perform well in all my academic subjects. Besides, I have  collected plenty of important materials for the preparation of the College Entrance Examination, which contain all the necessary knowledge we need to review  in a systematic way. I am very glad to share these materials as well as my experience in preparing and taking the College Entrance Examination with others. Lastly, I take an active part in various activities in and outside my school and have been able to keep a really good  relationship with those around me; thus, I do think I am the very person you are looking  for. I look forward to your reply at 88866907.
Your sincerely
Li Hua

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