Question

19．2009年教育進(jìn)展國際評估組織對全球21個(gè)國家進(jìn)行的調(diào)查結(jié)果顯示，中國孩子的計(jì)算能力排名第一，想象力排名倒數(shù)第一，創(chuàng)造力排名倒數(shù)第五．
請你寫一篇題目為"Imagination and Creativity Among Chinese Students"的短文．在文中請分析造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因并提出提高想象力和創(chuàng)造力的方法．
要求：
1．短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域．        
2．短文詞數(shù)120左右（不含已寫好的部分）．
3．內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫．      
4．書寫須清晰、工整．
5．短文中不能體現(xiàn)本人真實(shí)信息．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息2009年教育進(jìn)展國際評估組織對全球21個(gè)國家進(jìn)行的調(diào)查結(jié)果顯示，中國孩子的計(jì)算能力排名第一，想象力排名倒數(shù)第一，創(chuàng)造力排名倒數(shù)第五．請你寫一篇題目為"Imagination and Creativity Among Chinese Students"的短文．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：在文中請分析造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因并提出提高想象力和創(chuàng)造力的方法    2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：rarely幾乎不，很少；learn by heart牢記；contribute to有助于；come up with 提出；
Teachers and parents teach them that education is all about passing these exams with flying colors．（高分句型一）
To make students creative，educators should encourage them to use their imagination to the full．（高分句型二）
 Only by being imaginative can our students come up with creative solutions to problems and expand their world．（高分句型三）

解答 Imagination and Creativity Among Chinese Students
      Chinese students rarely get the time or chance to use their imagination．Right from the day they enter school they are pushed into a culture of exams and more exams．Teachers and parents teach them that education is all about passing these exams with flying colors．（高分句型一）And to pass those exams，they are made to learn by heart standard answers．
       Creativity stems from imagination．To make students creative，educators should encourage them to use their imagination to the full．（高分句型二） It is important for students to give wings to their imagination beyond school hours，too．And parents can contribute to the creative development of their children by encouraging them to be more inquisitive．
      Only by being imaginative can our students come up with creative solutions to problems and expand their world．（高分句型三）

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．