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【題目】現(xiàn)在全社會(huì)都在倡導(dǎo)低碳生活，呵護(hù)地球家園。而每年的元宵節(jié)，你所在的城市都要舉行一場(chǎng)20分鐘的焰火晚會(huì)。據(jù)報(bào)道：一場(chǎng)這樣的焰火晚會(huì)耗資大約150萬(wàn)元。市民為此議論紛紛。請(qǐng)你以“Is it Wise to Celebrate the Lantern Festival with Fireworks？”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)此的看法。

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2．為了使行文流暢，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3．詞數(shù)120左右。

Is it Wise to Celebrate the Lantern Festival with Fireworks?

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Answer 1

【答案】Is_it_Wise_to_Celebrate_the_Lantern_Festival_with_Fireworks?

In China，it's a custom to celebrate the Lantern Festival by setting off fireworks.Is it wise to celebrate the Lantern Festival with fireworks?

In my city，there is an annual firework show sponsored by the government.It is true that setting off fireworks does offer relaxation and excitement to the citizens.However，I don't think it is wise to celebrate the Lantern Festival in this way.My reasons are as follows.

Firstly，it is really a waste of money.The fireworks last only 30 minutes，but it costs about 1.5 million yuan，which can be used for the city construction.Secondly，while fireworks are wonderful to look at，they cause air pollution.Besides，some unexpected fires might break out，causing heavy damage and loss.

In conclusion，celebrating the Lantern Festival with fireworks isn't necessary.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇開(kāi)放式作文，談?wù)撃壳叭�社�?huì)都在倡導(dǎo)的低碳生活，你以“Is it Wise to Celebrate the Lantern Festival with Fireworks？”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)此的看法。認(rèn)真審題和分析閱讀前面的提示，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)、錯(cuò)寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文是一篇開(kāi)放式作文，內(nèi)容符合題目要求，有自己的看法，句子布局合理，并在句中使用高級(jí)句子。it's a custom to celebrate the Lantern Festival by setting off fireworks動(dòng)詞不定式做真正的主語(yǔ)；there is an annual firework show sponsored by the government過(guò)去分詞做后置定語(yǔ)；but it costs about 1.5 million yuan，which can be used for the city construction.非限制性定語(yǔ)從句使用恰到好處；while fireworks are wonderful to look at，they cause air pollution.while（盡管），引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句；some unexpected fires might break out，causing heavy damage and loss.現(xiàn)在分詞做自然的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)；celebrating the Lantern Festival with fireworks isn't necessary.動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)；另外，However，as follows， Firstly，Besides，In conclusion，等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。