Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

A recent survey shows most students often communicate with their parents, and there are still some who think it embarrassed to share their ideas with them. Actually everyone should attach important to family communication. It strengthens the bond（關(guān)系） of the family and bridge the gap between children and parents. In addition to, sharing your personal problems and emotions will great help reduce the pressure on you and build up our confidence.

As for my family, we had a special dinner together every Saturday evening, over which everyone present takes turns to sharing one problem while the others try to suggest solutions. In this way whole family can enjoy every single bit of life.

Answer 1

【答案】1.and改成but 2.embarrassed改成embarrassing 3.important改成importance 4.bridge改成bridges 5.去掉to 6.great改成greatly 7.our改成your 8.had改成have 9.sharing改成share 10.whole前加the

【解析】1.句意：最新調(diào)查顯示多數(shù)學(xué)生經(jīng)常和父母交流，但是仍然有一些認(rèn)為和父母分享想法是令人尷尬的。此處是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把and改成but。

2.句意：但是仍然有一些認(rèn)為和父母分享想法是令人尷尬的。根據(jù)句意可知把embarrassed改成embarrassing。

3.固定搭配：attach importance to對---給予重視，故把important改成importance。

4.句意：它增強(qiáng)了家庭的紐帶，縮小了孩子與父母之間的之間的差距。bridge在此處是動(dòng)詞，“架橋”，句子是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是單數(shù)第三人稱，故把bridge改成bridges。

5. In addition to除---之外；In addition 另外，此外。因?yàn)榇颂幨嵌禾�，故�?yīng)該是In addition，所以去掉to。

6. 此處help是動(dòng)詞，副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故把great改成greatly。

7.句意：情感將幫助減少你的壓力，增強(qiáng)你的信心。故把our改成your。

8.根據(jù)every Saturday evening可知句子用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，故把had改成have。

9.固定搭配：takes turns to do sth.輪流去做某事，故把sharing改成share。

10.the whole family整個(gè)家庭，故在whole前加the。