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【題目】假如你是廣州電視臺“科技博覽”節(jié)目的編輯，每周你們欄目要向觀眾介紹一項科技發(fā)明。本周你們欄目要用英語向觀眾簡要介紹手機。請你為欄目主持人準(zhǔn)備一篇英文稿，內(nèi)容必須包括：

1．手機被視為大發(fā)明的原因；

2．現(xiàn)在手機的主要功能；

3．你認(rèn)為未來的手機會……。

要求：1.詞數(shù)150左右；

2．開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

This is GZTV, Science and Technology View. We are now on the air with a 45minute regular program to bring you a big invention — cellphones.

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Answer 1

【答案】This is GZTV, Science and Technology View. We are now on the air with a 45minute regular program to bring you a big invention — cellphones.

Many people consider the cellphone one of the greatest inventions last century. There are several reasons as follows. First of all, it has changed our way of life and has sped the pace of our work. As a useful tool, it makes it possible for us to talk to anyone no matter where we are and what we are doing. What's more, the cellphone is a good tool to have fun and makes us feel cool.

Modern cellphones are also being used as cameras and radios, and to send emails or to surf the Internet. The latest cellphones have many functions such as games, music and an electric calendar that will remind you of appointments and important dates.

It's believed that cellphones in the future will be much smarter, and prices will be more competitive. Maybe cellphones will be built into our body so that we can phone conveniently.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇為主持人準(zhǔn)備的一篇英文稿，內(nèi)容必須包括：手機被視為大發(fā)明的原因；現(xiàn)在手機的主要功能；你認(rèn)為未來的手機會……。首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，根據(jù)所給出要點，充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

本文是一篇英文稿，語言精練，內(nèi)容齊全，重點突出，文章結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級詞匯和句子。it makes it possible for us to talk to anyone no matter where we are and what we are doing.句中使用讓步狀語從句，同時it做形式賓語；The latest cellphones have many functions such as games, music and an electric calendar that will remind you of appointments and important dates.句中such---that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句；Maybe cellphones will be built into our body so that we can phone conveniently.句中使用目的狀語從句；另外，First of all, What's more, It's believed that---，等的運用為文章增色添彩。