【題目】假如你是李華，你的美國網(wǎng)友Jack目前正在一家孔子學(xué)院學(xué)習(xí)漢語，你們倆約定每周都給對方寫一封信，他用漢語，你用英語，以期相互學(xué)習(xí)和幫助。最近你收到他發(fā)來的一封電子郵件，請你根據(jù)下列提示用英語給他寫一封回信：

1. 表揚(yáng)他的進(jìn)步，并指出來信中的錯誤；

2. 給他一些改進(jìn)的具體建議；

3. 你將發(fā)給他一篇游記，期待他對你的郵件進(jìn)行回復(fù)。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：80-120；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Jack,

I’m just so glad to receive your regular letter. ___________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Jack,

I’m just so glad to receive your regular letter.

I’m proud to tell you that you have made rapid progress in such a short time! You letter is better written than the last one. Obviously, you have mastered how to use some Chinese characters freely. But it doesn’t mean there’s no problem at all. For instance, unlike English, we usually use “因為……所以……” in one sentence. So you should correct the fourth sentence in your letter. And I advise you to do more reading and try to use these sentence patterns in your writing as possible as you can.

I wrote a travel journal about our trip to a natural park yesterday. I’ll send it to you later. If there is any mistake in my writing, please tell me and correct it for me. I’m sure we both will make great progress this way.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇書信。文章給出了提綱式漢語提示。成文時應(yīng)注意一下幾點(diǎn)：（1）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全；a表揚(yáng)他的進(jìn)步，并指出來信中的錯誤;b給他一些改進(jìn)的具體建議;c你將發(fā)給他一篇游記，期待他對你的郵件進(jìn)行回復(fù)。（2）人稱：以第一人稱為主；（3）時態(tài)：一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主；（4）適當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢；（5）恰當(dāng)使用一些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】1.使用高級句型：（1）I’m proud to tell you that you have made rapid progress in such a short time!.（2）It’s a great help for me to learn English well.2.使用了過渡詞語：Obviously. For instance .But it doesn’t mean there’s no problem at all.,. 3.使用了重要短語：advise you to do. make great progress. looking forward to doing.hear from sb.

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