Question

15．學(xué)校的體育館有很多問題，如使用率不高、設(shè)施陳舊等．假如你是李華，請你用英文給校長寫一封100-120詞的信，就如何改善體育館，更好地發(fā)揮其作用，提出一些建議，并說明理由．
注意：1．建議不少于兩條．
2．文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名．
3．信的抬頭與落款已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）．
Dear headmaster，
I'm writing to talk about the stadium of our school．I find our stadium isn't functioning as it should be．Most of the time it is closed and only a few sports facilities are available，which can't cater to students'needs．As we know，sporting is very important to students'physical and mental health．So I suggest our school should improve our stadium．
First，we had better extend its opening time so that students can exercise even on rainy days or during break time．Second，more sports facilities are needed so that we can participate in various sports activities．For example，a swimming pool will be widely welcome．I think it is necessary for our school to start a swimming lesson to teach students the survival skill．
We hope that you will seriously consider my suggestions．
Yours sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是李華給校長寫的一封信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一反映學(xué)校的體育館的問題并且說明運(yùn)動的重要性；二提出改善體育館的一些建議；三希望校長考慮自己的建議．
高分句型：
1．Most of the time it is closed and only a few sports facilities are available，which can't cater to students'needs．句子里 available表示"可利用的"；which運(yùn)動非限制性定語從句，代指主句；cater to students'needs表示"滿足學(xué)生的需要"．
大多數(shù)時(shí)間它都關(guān)著門，只有幾個(gè)運(yùn)動設(shè)施可以利用，這樣就不能滿足學(xué)生的需要．
2．Second，more sports facilities are needed so that we can participate in various sports activities．句子里so that 引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句，表示"為了"； participate in 表示"參加"；various表示"各種各樣的"．
第二，為了我們能參加各種各樣的運(yùn)動，需要更多的運(yùn)動設(shè)施．

解答 Dear headmaster，
     I'm writing to tell you about the stadium of our school．I find our stadium isn't functioning as it should be．Most of the time it is closed and only a few sports facilities are available，which can't cater to students'needs．【高分句型一】As we know，sporting is very important to students'physical and mental health．So I suggest our school should improve our stadium．（反映學(xué)校的體育館的問題并且說明運(yùn)動的重要性）
       First，we had better extend its opening time so that students can exercise even on rainy days or during break time．Second，more sports facilities are needed so that we can participate in various sports activities．【高分句型二】For example，a swimming pool will be widely welcome．I think it is necessary for our school to start a swimming lesson to teach students the survival skill．（提出改善體育館的一些建議）
      We hope that you will seriously consider my suggestions．（希望校長考慮自己的建議）
                                                                                                                                                                  Yours sincerely
                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

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