Question

VI . 作文：(25分)
假設(shè)你是李璐，你所在的城市在建國(guó)六十周年慶典之際出現(xiàn)了如下變化：
1. 很多高樓拔地而起；
2. 街道拓寬了，兩旁建起了綠化帶；
3. 建筑、街道增加了照明設(shè)施，夜景很美；
4. 道路、公園干凈了，河水清澈了，能更多地看到藍(lán)天、白云了。
請(qǐng)你寫封120詞左右的郵件給美國(guó)的筆友Harry，告訴他你們城市的上述變化，和他一起分享你的快樂(lè)心情。
注意：1. 郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。
Dear Harry,
I’m so glad to write to you again to tell you about some changes in my city.________________
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Lu

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Harry,
I’m so glad to write to you again to tell you about some changes in my city。As the 60th anniversary of our great motherland draws near ，a great many changes have taken place in our city。
To begin with，a lot of tall buildings have been constructed 。the roads and streets have been widened and now have many flowers ，trees and grass on both sides，so people feel pleasant when driving or riding a bike。Also，most buildings and streets have been equipped with many kinds of lights that look really beautiful at night 。what’s more mthere is less rubbish on the roads and in the parks and the rivers are becoming much cleaner 。
What makes me happiest is that we can see more blue sky and white clouds than before。Hope you can share my happiness！
Best wishes ！
Yours sincerely，
Lihua

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