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13．假設(shè)你是高二（1）班李華，參與學(xué)校英語校刊征稿活動，向全校同學(xué)推薦一個游戲網(wǎng)頁．請根據(jù)下面提供的信息，介紹該網(wǎng)頁的基本情況，并談?wù)勛约簩Υ嘶顒拥母邢耄?br />參考詞匯：贊助商sponsor（n．）；一粒a grain of
注意：
1．開頭已為你寫好．
2．詞數(shù)不少于60．
My dear fellow schoolmates，here I'm introducing you an interesting game website．
                                                                        
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                        

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們向全校同學(xué)推薦一個游戲網(wǎng)頁，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：介紹該網(wǎng)頁的基本情況．談?wù)勛约簩Υ嘶顒拥母邢耄�我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為介紹該網(wǎng)頁的基本情況．第二部分為談?wù)勛约簩Υ嘶顒拥母邢耄?br />重點短語與句型：
introduce sb sth．向某人介紹某物…
be aimed to 目的，旨在
be curious about 好奇
make a big difference to起作用，有影響
高分句型一：My dear fellow schoolmates，here I'm introducing you an interesting game website，which  is aimed to help hungry children as well as enlarge the English vocabulary of the game players．．此句用了 which  引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句
高分句型二：I think the rice I donate may not make a big difference to end hunger in the world此句用了定語從句 I donate 修飾the rice

解答 My dear fellow schoolmates，here I'm introducing you an interesting game website，which  is aimed to help hungry children as well as enlarge the English vocabulary of the game players．（高分句型一）Recently I find my English has greatly improved since I started playing the games on it．If you are curious about it．Please log on the website http://www．freerice．com now．Then you may start to answer the questions on English words．For each answer you get right，the sponsor of the website will donate 10 grains of rice to the WFP．（介紹該網(wǎng)頁的基本情況）
    I think the rice I donate may not make a big difference to end hunger in the world．（高分句型二）．However，if every day thousands of people earn grains of rice，while having fun and learning on Freerice，the power will surely be greater．My dear schoolmates，do you want to try something different and meaningful？Join me and join Freerice!（談?wù)勛约簩Υ嘶顒拥母邢耄?/p>

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．