Question

【題目】每年高考后，高考狀元被“熱炒”。他們被各種采訪和社會活動所包圍。對此現(xiàn)象，有

些人表示支持，有些人表示反對。請你結(jié)合下表，圍繞“Should we give more attention to

Top-rated college entrance exam takers?”這一話題寫一篇英語短文來介紹這一現(xiàn)象并給出自己的看法。

支持者認為	1. 可以促進社會對教育的重視
	2. 可以為廣大學子樹立良好的榜樣
反對者認為	1. 過度的關(guān)注對狀元本人有害
	2. 高分不一定高能

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右

2. 可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。

Every year after the college entrance exam，the top—rated exam takers will attract wide attention from all over the country.

Answer 1

【答案】

Every year after the college entrance exam, the top-rated exam takers will attract wide attention from all over the country. They accept various interviews.,take part in different social activities and receive quite a lot of prize money as well.

Some people say "yes” to this phenomenon. They think, for one thing, it can make more people care about education; for another, those top students can and do set good examples to the rest of the students.

However, others hold opposite opinions about this, they believe that giving too much attention to those top winners can do more harm than good to them. Meanwhile, high marks don’t necessarily mean strong ability.

In my opinion，it’s all right to give proper attention to those top winners, but we shouldn’t pay too much attention to them. After all, exams and marks aren't everything.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇圖表類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語attract wide attention吸引注意力；take part in參與 ；care about關(guān)心；set good examples to為...設(shè)立榜樣；They accept various interviews.,take part in different social activities and receive quite a lot of prize money as well這個句子提到三個并列的謂語動詞，時態(tài)保持一致；they believe that giving too much attention to those top winners can do more harm than good to them.這個句子考查到動名詞做主語。