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3．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在此處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出修改的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計分．
My dream school starts at 8：30 a．m．a(chǎn)nd ends at 3：30 p．m．They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon．We didn't need to do so many homework．Therefore，we have more time with after-school activities．For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day．
 My d ream school look like a big garden．There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings．We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening music．The teachers here a re kind and helpfully．They are not only our teachers but also our friends．

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分析 本文主要介紹作者夢想中的學校．一天上五節(jié)課，有時間讓學生閱讀和運動．教室周圍滿是花草和樹木，老師亦師亦友．

解答 My dream school starts at 8：30 a．m．a(chǎn)nd ends at 3：30 p．m．They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon．We didn't need to do so many homework．Therefore，we have more time with after-school activities．For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day．
 My dream school look like a big garden．There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings．We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening∧music．The teachers here are kind and helpfully．They are not only our teachers but also our friends．
詳解：
1．They改為There 考查there be的句型．there+be+名詞+時間或者地點狀語，意為"某地（某時間）有…"．
2．didn't改為don't 考查動詞時態(tài)．通讀全文，時態(tài)都是一般現(xiàn)在時．
3．many改為much 考查形容詞．homework是不可數(shù)名詞，用much修飾，many修飾可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)．
4．with改為for 考查介詞． We have time for sth．意為"我們有做…的時間"，此處介詞for可以理解為目的．
5．hour改為hours 考查名詞的復數(shù)形式．句子中的one and a half意思是1.5或者一個半小時，后面的名詞要用復數(shù)形式．
6．look改為looks 考查主謂一致．主語my dream school是第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語動詞應該是現(xiàn)在第三人稱單數(shù)形式．
7．去掉the 考查冠詞．此處flowers和trees均為泛指，不用冠詞，去掉the．
8．sat改為sit 考查動詞時態(tài)．根據(jù)全文用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，連詞or后面的過去式sat應該與前面的謂語動詞can lie一致，用sit．
9．加to 考查詞語用法．listen是不及物動詞，后接賓語時要帶上介詞to．
10．helpfully改為helpful 考查形容詞．a(chǎn)nd是并列連詞，它前后連接兩個相同的語法成分，kind和helpful都是形容詞作表語．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學生習作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．