【題目】眾所周知，課堂是每個(gè)學(xué)生實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的地方，然而，有一部分同學(xué)并沒有很好地利用它。請(qǐng)以How should we make good use of classes?為題，寫一篇文章，應(yīng)包含以下要點(diǎn)：

簡(jiǎn)要說明課堂的意義；

目前課堂中存在的主要問題；

分析原因并提出建議。

注意：

1. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容需要適當(dāng)拓展，以使行文連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)100左右。

【答案】

As we all know, class is a place where students ought to work hard to realize their dreams. However, there are some students not using class properly, making things go from bad to worse.

For example, some students play mobile phones or sleep in class, wasting quantities of precious time.What's worse,some students enjoy chatting with others. Not only does it affect their own study, but also it will do harm to others.

As far as I am concerned, the main reason is that they don't realize the importance of study. To solve this problem, they have to understand making full use of class is the best way to improve the efficiency of study. After all, time waits for no man.

【解析】

試題分析：考官評(píng)卷首先會(huì)根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言判定作文所屬的檔次，然后從：內(nèi)容切題，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、多樣、連貫、得體，這幾個(gè)方面評(píng)定分?jǐn)?shù)。注意條理要清晰，邏輯順序和結(jié)構(gòu)要恰當(dāng)，同時(shí)要盡量保持簡(jiǎn)潔精干的內(nèi)容，不拖泥帶水。要注意題中所給的信息，不可偏題，應(yīng)用文寫作對(duì)于文章內(nèi)容的要求是要達(dá)到寫作目的。盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。【亮點(diǎn)說明】第一句用了一個(gè)as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和一個(gè)表示地點(diǎn)的定語(yǔ)從句：As we all know ，class is a place where students ought to work hard to realize their dreams. 正如我們都知道的，班級(jí)是一個(gè)學(xué)生們努力學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)現(xiàn)他們夢(mèng)想的地方。第三段第一句用了一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句As far as I am concerned, the main reason is that they don't realize the importance of study. 就我而言，我認(rèn)為最主要的原因是因?yàn)樗麄儧]有意識(shí)到學(xué)習(xí)的重要性。文章運(yùn)用了大量的高級(jí)短語(yǔ)和好的結(jié)構(gòu)，使得文章連貫有層次。第一段最后一句 making things go from bad to worse使得事情由不好變得更壞、第二段第一句wasting quantities of precious time浪費(fèi)了大量時(shí)間是現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語(yǔ)。還有however然而、For example例如、What's worse更糟糕的事情是； not only…but also 不僅…而且；do harm to對(duì)…有害；After all, 畢竟。這些好的連接詞和短語(yǔ)為文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn):考察命題作文。

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