Question

書面表達(dá)：（25分）
1. 趙州橋位于河北省趙縣以南，被聯(lián)合國(guó)列為世界文化遺產(chǎn)，得到了中國(guó)政府很好的保護(hù)。
2. 趙州橋始建于公元590年，花費(fèi)18年的時(shí)間，由李春設(shè)計(jì)建造。
3. 趙州橋全部是由石頭建成。
4. 橋長(zhǎng)50.82米，寬10米，比中國(guó)古代的任何石橋都要寬，恰似一彎大彩虹。
5. 每年都有成千上萬的人來參觀。
寫作要求：1. 標(biāo)題：Zhaozhou Stone Bridge
2. 字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右。內(nèi)容必須包括所有提示要點(diǎn)，不要逐條翻譯。
3. 生詞：文化遺產(chǎn)---cultural heritage   彩虹---rainbow  被列為---be listed as

Answer 1

Zhaozhou Stone Bridge, standing south of Zhao County, Hebei Province, is listed as a world’s cultural heritage by the United States. It was Li Chun who started to build the bridge in 590 AD and spent 18 years finishing it.
The bridge, wholly made of stones, is 50.82 meters long and 10 meters wide. It is said that it is wider than any other stone  bridge in ancient China and looks like a big rainbow. Zhaozhou Stone Bridge, visited by hundreds and thousands of tourists yearly, is preserved well by the Chinese government.

解析這篇作文是按要點(diǎn)介紹趙州橋，包括趙州橋的建筑情況，設(shè)計(jì)，重大意義，寫這篇作文時(shí)，學(xué)生應(yīng)遵循要點(diǎn)，也不能拘泥于要點(diǎn)，不能逐字逐句地翻譯，還要適當(dāng)?shù)奶砑�，是文章連貫。
在行文中，不能受漢語的影響，而要用地道的英語表達(dá)，這就要學(xué)生多用所學(xué)內(nèi)容，特別是一些固定句型，可以讓具有英語語言的特點(diǎn),如范文中的：standing south of Zhao County, Hebei Province, is listed as a world’s cultural heritage by the United States.
這里用現(xiàn)在分詞做定語，It was Li Chun who started to build the bridge in 590 AD and spent 18 years finishing it.這是一個(gè)典型的強(qiáng)調(diào)句。The bridge, wholly made of stones, is 50.82 meters long and 10 meters wide.這句話用過去分詞做定語。It is said that it is wider than any other stone  bridge in ancient China and looks like a big rainbow.這句話用的是it的形式主語的句型，讀起來很流暢。這些都是學(xué)生在平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)考試中要借鑒的。