Question

假定你是李華，就暑假游覽北山公園時(shí)看到的一些情況給報(bào)社寫一封信，對(duì)這些情況進(jìn)行反映并提出建議。
內(nèi)容包括：1、有些游客隨意亂扔垃圾、亂寫亂畫；
2、有些古跡（the cultural sites）已遭到破壞；
3、你的建議；
注意： 1、詞數(shù)：100左右;    
2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear editor,
I’m Li Hua, writing to tell you something about what I saw in the Bei Shan Park this summer and I became very worried.
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Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear editor,
I’m Li Hua, writing to tell you something about what I saw in the Bei Shan Park. I visited it this summer and I became very worried. Along the road some people threw paper and empty bottles everywhere, and others drew pictures or wrote their names on the old trees. How badly they damaged some of the cultural sites there.
As we all know there are so many visitors there everyday. If they don’t pay attention to their behaviors, the cultural sites will be destroyed. So I strongly suggest we encourage people to protect everything there. Maybe we can make a website about it or ask certain people to guard some of them. At the same time, the government should take some actions.
Yours,
Zhang Hua

解析試題分析：考查半開放性作文。本文屬于半開放性作文，所給的話題是游客的隨手扔垃圾的情況，給的要點(diǎn)不多，可以從個(gè)人建議方面展開，如加強(qiáng)本方面的教育，在旅游景點(diǎn)加強(qiáng)監(jiān)管等等。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
考點(diǎn)：考查半開放性作文寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。