Question

  短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（^）。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

      2 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

Answer 1

1.friend---friends；Most of 決定了名詞必須用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

2. it—one；it代替同一個(gè)，one指同類里邊的一個(gè)，此處與前面提到的是一類。

3.that---which；非限制性定語從句的先行詞指物時(shí)只能用which不能用that.

4.the money前加for；此處ask my father的目的是錢，the money需要加表目的的介詞。

5.He----I；由前句he said he could only give me half of the money 和后句的myself可知.

6. 去掉after the school 中的the。

7.if---when；按照句意應(yīng)該是一個(gè)月后，當(dāng)我給他看錢的時(shí)候，可知此處應(yīng)該用when。

8.after---later；此處用副詞，不能用連詞。

9.gives---gave；按照上下文敘述的都是發(fā)生地事情。

10.去掉happy前的much；此處how與happy之間不需要加任何詞。