Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

It appear that people don't need phone boxes any longer. In a small British village, people decided to turning a red phone box into a library. Now, the phone box is one of the country smallest libraries. About 150 books sit on shelves in a phone box. Villagers there can take whatever they want and leave their own books for exchanges. They can use the library around the clock when it's open 365 days a year and 24 hours a day. Since the library opened its bright door, people from all parts of the village paid it a visit. Among it there're senior citizens living in the neighbourhood, children getting off school buses and university students are stopping by late at night. It is convenient for them to use such a wonderful library.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】appear 改為appears

【2】turning改為turn

【3】country改為country’s

【4】a改為the

【5】for改為in

【6】when改為because/since/as/for

【7】加have

【8】it改為them/those

【9】去掉are

【10】wonderfully改為wonderful

【解析】

【1】appear改為appears �？疾橹髦^一致。第一句that后面接賓語從句是一般現在時，前面的主句也是一般現在時，it為第三人稱，所以appear應該用復數形式，即appears。故appear改為appear。

【2】turning改為turn�？疾閯釉~搭配。第二句固定動詞搭配decide to do sth,中to為不定式結構，其后面接動詞原形。故turning改為turn。

【3】country改為country’s�？疾槊�詞所有格。根據people decided to turning a red phone box into a library. Now, the phone box is one of the country smallest libraries可知人們決定將紅色電話盒子已到圖書館，現在，那個電話盒子是國家最小的圖書館之一。由句意知國家作 libraries的前置定語，之間為從屬關系，故應用名詞所有格形式。故將country改為country’s。

【4】a改為the�？疾楣谠~。不定冠詞a/an用在可數名詞單數前，表示一個、一種等；the表示特指，用來修飾特定的人或物或事情，About 150 books sit on shelves in a phone box.中的phone box指的是前文出現的red phone box，為特指。故將a改為the

【5】for改為in。考查固定搭配。Leave sth in exchange：留下..作為交換。Villagers there can take whatever they want and leave their own books for exchanges意為村民可以拿走任何他們想要的書并留下他們自己的書作為交換。故將for改為in

【6】when改為because/since/as/for；第六句主句的意思是他們可以二十四小時使用這個圖書館，狀語從句的意思是它全年全天開放，主句是結果，從句是原因，應該使用表示原因的連詞引導從句。故wen改為because/since/as/for。

【7】在village paid中間加have�？疾闀r態(tài)。Since the library opened its bright door, people from all parts of the village paid it a visit中since引導的時間狀語，since此處意為自..以來，其主句一般與現在完成時連用。故在village paid中間加have

【8】將Among it 改為Among them/those�？疾榇�詞。It只能指代可數名詞單數或者不可數名詞。此處的it應該指代前面的people from all parts of the village中的people，people為復數名詞。故將Among it 改為Among them/those。

【9】去掉students are stopping 中的are�？疾閠here be句型結構。第八句是there be句型的特殊形式:there be sb doing,表示某地有某人或某物正在做某事，senior citizens living inthe neighborhood, children getting off school buses and university students shopping late at night是三個并列的結構。故去掉are。