Question

假如你叫李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Teddy即將到中國(guó)來旅游，他對(duì)中國(guó)的古文化遺址很感興趣，尤其是對(duì)長(zhǎng)城向往已久，請(qǐng)你給Teddy寫一封120詞左右的e-mail，向他簡(jiǎn)要介紹一下有關(guān)長(zhǎng)城的情況：

1. 長(zhǎng)城位于中國(guó)北部，全長(zhǎng)約6,700公里，1987年被列入《世界遺產(chǎn)名錄》；

2. 長(zhǎng)城從秦朝開始修建，修建長(zhǎng)城的最初目的是抵御外來敵人進(jìn)攻。

3. 長(zhǎng)城是古代勞動(dòng)人民創(chuàng)造的奇跡，是人類歷史上最偉大的工程之一。

參考詞匯：世界遺產(chǎn)名錄the World Heritage List；奇跡wonder

Dear Teddy,

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Wish you all the best. Hope to see you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua  

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Teddy,

I am glad to hear that you will come to China. You’ve told me that you are very interested in ancient Chinese cultural relics, especially the Great Wall. Now, I will give you a brief introduction to the Great Wall. The Great Wall is located in the northern part of China, the length of which is about 6,700 kilometers. In 1987, it was added to the World Heritage list. The Great Wall was originally built in the Qin Dynasty to defend against the attack of the enemies. The Great wall is a wonder that was created by the ancient Chinese working people and it is one of the greatest projects in the history of human beings.

Wish you all the best. Hope to see you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文，本文是介紹中國(guó)的偉大奇跡長(zhǎng)城，給出部分的要點(diǎn)。本文的難點(diǎn)在于選擇合適的詞匯把文字提示的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，同時(shí)要注意選擇合適的連接詞把各要點(diǎn)連接起來。也要使用多變的句式讓文章充滿變化，不要過于死板。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文介紹的是中國(guó)的長(zhǎng)城，要點(diǎn)給出不多。對(duì)考生的謀篇布局的能力要求較高，要合理的分布各個(gè)要點(diǎn)，用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞來連接成流暢的短文。在選擇詞匯時(shí)要注意選擇一些相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯讓文章的層次更高。