Question

作為中學(xué)生,你肯定經(jīng)歷過多次考試,體驗(yàn)過成功,也遭遇過失敗。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，簡(jiǎn)要闡述中學(xué)生中普遍存在的考試失敗的兩種態(tài)度，并結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，說明你的觀點(diǎn)。

消極態(tài)度		積極態(tài)度		你的態(tài)度
	當(dāng)考試結(jié)果不盡如人意時(shí)，情緒低落，喪失信心，不再繼續(xù)努力		當(dāng)考試失敗時(shí)，……		……

注意: 詞數(shù)：120左右
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Answer 1

We high school students have taken many tests and exams, which brought us not only the joy of success, but the frustration of failure as well. Different students may take the failures with different attitudes.
Some will lose heart and no longer study as hard as before. But most students take an active attitude towards it. They encourage themselves to be self-confident. In most cases, the students will turn to the experienced teachers and advisers, who can help them out with their own life stories or their experience. These students will benefit a lot from the failure by regaining the courage and the confidence in the end.
In my opinion, failure is the mother of success. Every great man failed many times before they succeeded eventually.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式作文，要點(diǎn)以表格形式給出，內(nèi)容與考生的日常生活非常接近，關(guān)于考試失敗的兩種態(tài)度，考生有話可說。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來。只是需要考生就自己的態(tài)度發(fā)表看法，要使用一些好的句式如the students will turn to the experienced teachers and advisers, who can help them out with their own life stories or their experience.,在個(gè)人看法部分可以使用一些諺語如：failure is the mother of success.來提升文章的檔次。還要用合適的連接詞把各要點(diǎn)連接成完整的文章，
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類作文要注意要點(diǎn)要全面，不能省略或者遺漏，發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)要貼近文章的中心思想不能有過多的發(fā)散。也要言之有理。