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14．如今越來越多的家長花巨資送孩子出國學習，某英文報社就這一問題做了調(diào)查，并開辟專欄討論．請你根據(jù)所給提示，以"On Teenagers Studying Abroad"為題用英語寫一篇短文．
1、38%的人贊成這種做法：
①孩子可以接受良好的教育：學好外語將來發(fā)展的機會更多
②開闊眼界，學會獨立生活
2、62%的人不贊成這種做法：①花錢太多
②孩子太小無法照顧自己：安全問題令人擔憂
3、你的看法（贊成與否）并給出至少一條理由
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On Teenagers Studying Abroad
Nowadays more and more people are sending their children abroad for further study．                  

Answer 1

分析 這是關(guān)于送孩子出國學習的優(yōu)缺點的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一提出討論的話題；二支持方的觀點；三反對方的觀點；四自己的看法．
高分句型：
1．What's the most important thing is that they can also learn to depend on themselves and broaden their horizons，improving their understanding of the world．句子里What's the most important thing 是主語從句；that they can also learn to depend on themselves and broaden their horizons，是表語從句；improving their understanding of the world是現(xiàn)在分詞做結(jié)果狀語．
最重要的事是，孩子可以學會獨立生活，開闊他們的眼界，從而提高他們對于世界的理解．
2．Although studying abroad is a good choice，students can also receive good education in our country，as long as our government take some measures to set up various schools and colleges to meet the needs of people句子里Although 引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句，表示"盡管"；as long as 引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句，表示"只要"；take some measures to 表示"采取措施做"．
盡管去國外學習是一個好的選擇，但是只要我們的政府采取措施建立各種類型的學校來滿足人們的需求，學生在我們國家也可以受到好的教育，

解答 On Teenagers Studying Abroad
Nowadays more and more people are sending their children abroad for further study．（提出討論的話題）38%of the people agree to this．They think their children can receive better education and learn a foreign language as well．And they can have more golden opportunities to develop themselves．What's the most important thing is that they can also learn to depend on themselves and broaden their horizons，improving their understanding of the world．【高分句型一】（支持方的觀點）
However，62% of the people are not in favor of it．The reasons are as follows．First of all，they think studying abroad costs too much money．Besides，children are too young to take care of themselves well．Many parents are worried about the safety of their children．（反對方的觀點）
In my opinion，I agree with the second view．Although studying abroad is a good choice，students can also receive good education in our country，as long as our government take some measures to set up various schools and colleges to meet the needs of people【高分句型二】（自己的看法）

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