Question

假設(shè)你是李華，是我校一位高三學(xué)生。最近你收到來(lái)自友好學(xué)校朋友Jack的邀請(qǐng)，請(qǐng)你下個(gè)月去他們學(xué)校參加文化交流活動(dòng)并介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)繪畫。 但是你和其他高三學(xué)生一樣在忙于備高考，不得不謝絕他的邀請(qǐng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)給Paul用英語(yǔ)寫一封回信。
要點(diǎn)： 1. 謝絕Paul的邀請(qǐng)；
2. 說(shuō)明你的理由；
3. 推薦你的同學(xué)Anna參加，并說(shuō)明原因。
注意： 1．詞數(shù)為120左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫好（不計(jì)入你所寫詞數(shù)）。
參考詞匯：National College Entrance Examination 高考
Dear Jack,
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Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,

Answer 1

Dear Jack,
Thank you very much for your invitation.
I’d love to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends, but I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t. The reason is that I, together with my classmates, am busy preparing myself for the coming National College Entrance Examination, which is very important for me
I strongly recommend my friend Anna, who is the most suitable choice to take my place next month. She began to learn painting at an early age and has a good knowledge of traditional Chinese painting, which, combined with her active personality and perfect spoken English, will help make your activity a success.
Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence and all the best wishes to you.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely,

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，寫一封回信。題目中給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。寫作中注意應(yīng)用一些比較經(jīng)典的句式短語(yǔ)等來(lái)提高作文的文采，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，注意文后要適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的想法。為了使表達(dá)更有邏輯性，適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞，連接詞等。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。