Question

14．假設(shè)你是美國洛杉磯高中留學(xué)的中國學(xué)生，在"Our County's Culture"課上，鳥向全班同學(xué)及老師介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日-----端午節(jié)．請你寫一篇稿子，包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1．端午節(jié)的時間及起源（農(nóng)歷五月初五）；
2．端午節(jié)的習(xí)俗；
3．邀請大家在端午節(jié)那天一起包粽子．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭已寫好，不包含在字?jǐn)?shù)內(nèi)．
Dear class，
I am very honored to have the chance tointroduce to all of you a traditional Chinese festival-Dragon Boat Festival．（高分句型一）
The 5th day of the 5th lunar month is a traditional Chinese festival dedicated to the great poet Qu Yuan for his devotion to his native state in ancient China．（高分句型二）It is a celebration to whichevery family has attached great importance．People in many ways paytheir respectsto QuYuan such as eating zongzi，racing dragon boats and so on．（高分句型三）The festival was long marked as a cultural holiday in China．Now it is also celebrated as"Poets'Day"in honor of Qu Yuan，who is known as China's first poet．Most excitingly，we can enjoy a three-day holiday together with weekends．
Maybe you're curious to know something about zongzi．Just sit straight，and I will show you how to make it and we will enjoy the zongzi we make together next class!（高分句型四）
Thank all you guys，see you next time!．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是美國洛杉磯高中留學(xué)的中國學(xué)生，在"Our County's Culture"課上，鳥向全班同學(xué)及老師介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日-----端午節(jié)．請你寫一篇稿子，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點(diǎn)：端午節(jié)的時間及起源（農(nóng)歷五月初五）；端午節(jié)的習(xí)俗；邀請大家在端午節(jié)那天一起包粽子．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be honoured to do很榮幸去做某事；in many ways在很多方面；and so on等等；be curious to do好奇的去做某事；
    I am very honored to have the chance to introduce to all of you a traditional Chinese festival-Dragon Boat Festival．（高分句型一）
   The 5th day of the 5th lunar month is a traditional Chinese festival dedicated to the great poet Qu Yuan for his devotion to his native state in ancient China．（高分句型二）
People in many ways pay their respects to Qu Yuan such as eating zongzi，racing dragon boats and so on．（高分句型三）
Just sit straight，and I will show you how to make it and we will enjoy the zongzi we make together next class!（高分句型四）

解答 Dear class，
        I am very honored to have the chance to introduce to all of you a traditional Chinese festival-Dragon Boat Festival．（高分句型一）
        The 5th day of the 5th lunar month is a traditional Chinese festival dedicated to the great poet Qu Yuan for his devotion to his native state in ancient China．（高分句型二）It is a celebration to which every family has attached great importance．People in many ways pay their respects to Qu Yuan such as eating zongzi，racing dragon boats and so on．（高分句型三）The festival was long marked as a cultural holiday in China．Now it is also celebrated as"Poets'Day"in honor of Qu Yuan，who is known as China's first poet．Most excitingly，we can enjoy a three-day holiday together with weekends．
        Maybe you're curious to know something about zongzi．Just sit straight，and I will show you how to make it and we will enjoy the zongzi we make together next class!（高分句型四）
        Thank all you guys，see you next time!

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．