Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你應(yīng)邀參加學(xué)校組織的“英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)師生座談會(huì)”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況，并對(duì)學(xué)校今后的英語(yǔ)教學(xué)提出建議。

自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的情況	1、英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的目標(biāo)；
	2、英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的方法；
	3、課外自學(xué)的途徑；
	……
對(duì)學(xué)校英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的建議	（請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷與感想，提出兩至三點(diǎn)建議。

注意：1、對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

2、詞數(shù)100左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3、文中不得提及學(xué)生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.

Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear teachers and schoolmates,it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I’m interested in English,and hope to be an interpreter in the future.Naturally,it’s very important for me to learn English well.As everybody knows,vocabulary is an important part of language,just like bricks in a building.I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible.After class,I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio.

Now,I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school.Firstly,we should be given more opportunities to use what we have learned in order to have a better grasp of it.Secondly,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them.Finally, I suggest we have more English activities,such as English contests and festivals.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于議論文，根據(jù)提示信息來(lái)闡明自己對(duì)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的觀點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象，行文要有邏輯和適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞。 3、注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。注意：注意：1、對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。2、詞數(shù)100左右。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，有恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞使得文章條理清晰。比如After,Firstly,Secondly，Finally等連接詞的使用讓文章看起來(lái)思路清楚，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了許多高級(jí)詞匯。句型多樣，如Firstly,we should be given more opportunities to use what we have learned in order to have a better grasp of it.是賓語(yǔ)從句，還有Dear teachers and schoolmates,it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.運(yùn)用了it’s a great pleasure for sb. to do sth句型。Secondly,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them.此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次。