Question

假如你是李華，針對你市目前的交通堵塞問題，給市長寫一封信，提出自己的建議。要點(diǎn)如下：
1．私家車增多和司機(jī)的違規(guī)行駛造成交通堵塞；
2．提出具體的解決辦法；
3．希望市長予以答復(fù)。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；   2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：混亂chaos；車道lane；停車場parking lot
Dear Mayor，
I’m writing to give some suggestions to improve our city’s transportation.
                                                                   
                                                                   
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mayor，
I’m writing to give some suggestions to improve our city’s transportation.
At present, traffic jams have become a major problem faced by most people of our city every day. The number of private cars has been increasing.  What’s more, some drivers disobey traffic rules, causing traffic chaos. All this often results in traffic jams.
In my opinion，measures must be taken to solve this problem. First, the government should encourage people to use public transport more and at the same time limit private cars. Second，more lanes and parking lots should be built. Third, it’s important to educate the public to obey traffic rules.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。假如你是李華，針對你市目前的交通堵塞問題，給市長寫一封信，提出自己的建議。要點(diǎn)如下：1．私家車增多和司機(jī)的違規(guī)行駛造成交通堵塞；2．提出具體的解決辦法；
3．希望市長予以答復(fù)。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】What’s more, some drivers disobey traffic rules, causing traffic chaos.這里現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語。I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.這里的句型I would appreciate it if用的很好。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類書面表達(dá)