Question

以下是肇慶端硯（Duan Inkstone）的相關(guān)信息：

歷史： 1）因產(chǎn)地在肇慶的端州而得名；     2）端硯名列中國(guó)四大名硯之首； 3）一種傳統(tǒng)的手工藝品，歷史悠久，起源于1300多年前; 4）盛行于宋朝時(shí)期，當(dāng)時(shí)深受中國(guó)文人的青睞。 特性： 1）端硯的種類多，質(zhì)量好，設(shè)計(jì)精美；  2）目前端硯深受收藏家的喜愛。 作用： 1）一種書寫的重要工具；  2）端硯在傳播中國(guó)文化中起著重要作用； 3）是肇慶深厚文化底蘊(yùn)的標(biāo)志。

參考詞匯：  端硯：Duan Inkstone    手工藝品: handcraft      文人：literati

【寫作內(nèi)容】請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上信息寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹肇慶手工藝品“端硯”，了解“端硯” 文化，內(nèi)容包括：端硯的歷史、特性和它的作用。

【寫作要求】只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Duan Inkstone, ranking the first of “The Four Famous Inkstones” in China, got its name for the fact that it was originally produced in Duanzhou of Zhaoqing. It’s also widely known as a traditional handcraft and has a long history going back to more than 1300 years ago. Duan Inkstone became universally popular in Song Dynasty, when it was favored by ancient Chinese literati. Nowadays, many collectors would add to their collection of Duan Inkstone owing to its wide varieties, high quality, let alone its beautiful design. As an important writing tool, Duan Inkstone has played a very important role in spreading Chinese culture, and it is also a symbol of profound cultural background of Zhaoqing.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求學(xué)生根據(jù)提供的信息寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹肇慶的手工藝品端硯。寫作內(nèi)容必須包括端硯的歷史、特性和作用。對(duì)端硯的描述要客觀，不可胡編亂造，使用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作。注意不要出現(xiàn)拼寫和時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：范文使用了一些重要與市政府：非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞ranking the first of “The Four Famous Inkstones”和going back to more than 1300 years ago；同位語(yǔ)從句the fact that it was originally produced in Duanzhou of Zhaoqing；定語(yǔ)從句when it was favored by ancient Chinese literati和As an important writing tool等，能夠熟練使用語(yǔ)法知識(shí)進(jìn)行遣詞造句，提升了作文的層次；

范文使用了owing to；let alone；played a very important role in等，使作文內(nèi)容顯得充實(shí)。

考點(diǎn)：材料類作文