Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(^)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Last weekend we went mountain-climbing.

Even the heavy rain can not stop us.

We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit.

On either side of the road was green fields.

We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter.

At noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes.

After short rest, we started going down

It rained more harder.

We were wet all over, and we still felt happy.

Answer 1

1.can 改為could

2.extreme改為extremely

3.spirit改為spirits

4.was改為were

5.mixing改為mixed

6.去掉top

7.theres改為where

8.加上a

9.more改為much

10.and改為but

【解析】

1. 改為could；由第一句可知，文章使用的是過去時態(tài)，故第二句Even the heavy rain can not stop us. can要改為could。

2. set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit. narrow窄的，形容詞，古要用副詞來修飾。故extreme改為extremely。

3. 精神，是可數(shù)名詞。第三句We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit.中spirit要改為spirits。

4. either side of the road was green fields. 中介詞短語作主語，主語要根據(jù)green fields來確定，green fields是復數(shù)形式，故謂語動詞be動詞要用復數(shù)形式。was改為were。

5. could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter。mix，vt混合，be mixed with…混合…。這里用過去分詞短語作定語。故要把mixing改為mixed。

6. noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes.

7. noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by the beauty of the scenes.中，后面部分是一個where引導的定語從句，修飾前面的mountain，要用關系代詞where引導。故把there改為where。

8. short rest, we started going down中，在短暫的休息之后，應該是After a short rest.故要加上a。

9. rained more harder.中形容詞的比較級一般用much修飾，故要把more改為much。

10. were wet all over, and we still felt happy.兩個句子中間是轉折的關系。所以要把and改為but。

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