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【題目】你們學(xué)校“英語愛好者俱樂部”對“良好飲食習(xí)慣”這一話題進(jìn)行了討論。請根據(jù)下表中的內(nèi)容提示, 用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

部分同學(xué)的飲食習(xí)慣	不吃早餐, 愛吃零食, 偏食, 飲食過量
良好的飲食習(xí)慣	飲食多樣化, 飲食定時定量
個人看法	良好的飲食習(xí)慣很重要, 有助于身體健康

注意: 1. 詞數(shù)120個左右;

2. 開頭已為你寫好, 內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 注意行文連貫;

3. 參考詞匯: 偏食be picky about food 零食snack 定時定量regularly and properly

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’ s important for us to form healthy eating habits.

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As far as I’ m concerned, I think it is important to keep a healthy diet, which contributes to building up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy for our study.

That’ s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’ s important for us to form healthy eating habits.

However, some students have formed a variety of bad eating habits, such as not having breakfast, loving eating snacks, being picky about food, eating and drinking too much and so on, which will surely do harm to their health. To keep healthy, we should have healthy diets. Not only should we have various food, like fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as rice, noodles, but also we should have food regularly and properly.

【解析】試題本文考查半開放性的議論文。討論的話題是“良好飲食習(xí)慣”。寫好這篇作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文是一篇議論文，應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以一、三人稱為主。接著根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。切記寫作時語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。最后不要忘記認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【范文亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評】

范文短小精悍，脈絡(luò)清楚很合理。也使用一些高級句式，如...such as not having breakfast, loving eating snacks, being picky about food, eating and drinking too much and so on,使用了并列的動名詞結(jié)構(gòu)；which will surely do harm to their health.使用了非限制性定語從句；Not only should we have various food, like fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as rice, noodles, but also we should have food regularly and properly.使用了倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，not only...but also結(jié)構(gòu)等。