Question

【題目】文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I once bought the beautiful bracelet from a store and felt excited when I tried it on. Sadly, I was soon disappointed at that my naughty kids broke it. But instead of just feel sad, I chose to repair it myself.

To my greatly surprise, it didn’t take a long time to do it. As time went by, I found that I was not happy with just repairing my breaking bracelets. I started making new bracelets out the materials from my old one. Later on, I begin to design on my own

Then I made my first deal. Back in 2013, I posted my bracelets on WeChat for the first time and several friends said that they wanted it. That was just the start. With much materials at hand, I made my designs into reality.

Answer 1

【答案】1. beautiful 前 the→a

2. disappointed 后 at 去掉

3. feel→feeling

4. greatly→great

5. breaking→broken

6. out 后加of

7. one→ones

8. begin→began

9. it→them

10. much→many

【解析】本文為記敘文。文章記敘了作者一個心愛的手鐲弄壞了，于是她開始用舊手鐲加工新的手鐲，結(jié)果加工出來的手鐲還很受歡迎。

第一處：beautiful前the改為a；考查冠詞。此處表泛指“一個手鐲”，應(yīng)使用不定冠詞。故 beautiful前the改為a。

第二處：disappointed后at去掉；考查句型。be+adj.+that從句。故disappointed后at去掉。

第三處：feel改為feeling；考查介詞搭配。此處作of的賓語，應(yīng)使用-ing分詞。故feel改為feeling。

第四處：greatly改為great；考查形容詞。此處修飾surprise，作定語，應(yīng)使用形容詞。故greatly改為great。

第五處：breaking改為broken；考查過去分詞作定語。broken“壞了的”。故breaking改為broken。

第六處：out后加of；考查詞組搭配。make sth. out of sth.表示“在某樣原材料上雕刻加工獲得新物品”。故out后加of。

第七處：one改為ones；考查代詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。此處應(yīng)指“我的那些舊手鐲”，應(yīng)使用復(fù)數(shù)代詞。故one改為ones。

第八處：begin改為began；考查動詞時態(tài)。此處描述的是過去的事情，應(yīng)使用一般過去時。故begin改為began。

第九處：it改為them；考查代詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。此處指代my bracelets，應(yīng)使用復(fù)數(shù)代詞。故it改為them。

第十處：much改為many；考查修飾量詞。materials為可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，many修飾可數(shù)名詞，much修飾不可數(shù)名詞。故much改為many。