Question

【題目】假定你負責某一個學生英文報紙的“求助”欄目，最近收到一封求助信，全文如下：

Dear helpful,

I am a new senior middle school student. I have some trouble in learning English. When I entered this school, I made up my mind to learn English well. I spent much time reading and writing but I couldn’t make much progress. I can’t read the text smoothly. In class I am unable to understand what the teacher is saying in English. I am in great trouble. I’m afraid I will not catch up with my classmates forever. What should I do?

Yours, Troubled

請根據(jù)求助信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信, 在信中給出一些學好英語的建議。

注意：1.回信一定要有針對性； 2.詞數(shù)：120詞左右。

Dear Troubled,

Having learnt about the difficulties and problems of your learning English,

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Yours truly,

Helpful

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Troubled,

Having learnt about the difficulties and problems of your learning English, I can’t help writing this letter to express my view of learning English.

It is not very difficult to learn English well. (Now you are not good at English——it is likely that you didn’t study hard in junior middle school.) You still have the chance to catch up with others, so you shouldn’t lose heart. To learn English well, one must learn the new words by heart and go over the old ones on time. You’d better spend half an hour reading and learning the words by heart, new or old. And you must also spend some time reading the texts aloud, which can help improve your ability of listening and grammar you have learned. This knowledge can help you to write standard English. In addition, listening is very important, you can watch more English programms on TV or pick up English programms on the radio. The more you listen to English，the easier it becomes.

I hope you will find these proposals / suggestions / recommendations practical / useful / helpful.

Yours truly,

Helpful

【解析】

試題分析：假定你負責某一個學生英文報紙的“求助”欄目，最近收到一封求助信，全文如下：

Dear helpful,

I am a new senior middle school student. I have some trouble in learning English. When I entered this school, I made up my mind to learn English well. I spent much time reading and writing but I couldn’t make much progress. I can’t read the text smoothly. In class I am unable to understand what the teacher is saying in English. I am in great trouble. I’m afraid I will not catch up with my classmates forever. What should I do?

Yours, Troubled

請根據(jù)求助信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信, 在信中給出一些學好英語的建議。注意：1.回信一定要有針對性；2.詞數(shù)：120詞左右。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫.寫作時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。一定避免全部使用簡單句。

【亮點說明】It is not very difficult to learn English well.句中用動詞不定式做真正的主語；You still have the chance to catch up with others, so you shouldn’t lose heart.運用了并列句，同時劇中出現(xiàn)了兩個固定搭配catch up with和lose heart；To learn English well, one must learn the new words by heart and go over the old ones on time.動詞不定式作目的狀語；And you must also spend some time reading the texts aloud, which can help improve your ability of listening and grammar you have learned.句中恰當?shù)厥褂昧讼嘀�性定語從句和非限制性定語從句；In addition, listening is very important, you can watch more English programms on TV or pick up English programms on the radio. In addition用的很到位；The more you listen to English，the easier it becomes. 比較專于從句的運用更添光彩； I hope you will find these proposals / suggestions / recommendations practical / useful / helpful.最后一句出現(xiàn)了賓語從句的用法。