Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，目前正在英國做交換生，你的英國朋友Debbie送了你一張Ceilidh Dance舞會票�，F(xiàn)在，請給她寫一封郵件致謝，并詢問有關(guān)情況。（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Debbie,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Debbie,

I am delighted to receive your ticket for the Ceilidh Dance. I really feel grateful for your kindness and it will surely make my cultural experience here more colorful. Here, I’d like to know some derails about this dance party.

First, could you please give me a brief introduction of this dance so I can know something about it before attending it? Besides, I’d like to know whether I need to bring anything like a bag or a present, and particularly, what kind of clothes and shoes I’m supposed to wear, the formal ones or the casual ones? Finally, I’m wondering how I can get there and avoid being late.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題這是一篇提綱類作文，內(nèi)容是英國朋友Debbie送了你一張Ceilidh Dance舞會票，給她寫一封郵件致謝，并詢問有關(guān)情況。根據(jù)圖片可知，你需要向Debbie問四方面內(nèi)容：1. 舞會的介紹；2. 所要帶的東西；3. 需要穿的衣服或鞋子；4.怎么到達那兒。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如feel grateful for，be supposed to，avoid doing，look forward to；還運用句型：Besides, I’d like to know whether I need to bring anything like a bag or a present, and particularly, what kind of clothes and shoes I’m supposed to wear, the formal ones or the casual ones?這句話運用了賓語從句等。并注意了句子的銜接如first，besides，finally等等。