Question

1.假如你是李華。你的美國(guó)筆友 即將隨其父母來(lái)中國(guó)，并在中國(guó)度過(guò)中秋節(jié)。他來(lái)信向你詢問(wèn)有關(guān)中秋節(jié)的習(xí)俗，請(qǐng)你告訴他有關(guān)中秋節(jié)的習(xí)俗。

要點(diǎn)如下：

1.歷史悠久。 2. 中國(guó)人獨(dú)有的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。

3. 家庭團(tuán)圓。4. 共進(jìn)晚餐。

5. 吃月餅。 6. 賞月。

要求： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)。

3. 開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mike,

I’m glad to know that you are coming to China with your parents and spend the Mid-Autumn Day here.

 

 

 

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Mike,

I’m glad to know that you are coming to China with your parents and spend the Mid-Autumn Day here. The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is celebrated only by Chinese people. It falls on August 15th of the Chinese lunar year, when people of a family get together and enjoy the dinner together. After that they eat mooncakes, which stands for the spirits of the festival-unity. Often if the weather permits, they will go out of the house to enjoy the bright moonlight, talking about something pleasant. It is one of the most important festivals for Chinese people.

I wish you a pleasant journey and I’m sure you will like our traditional Mid-Autumn Day.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是關(guān)于中秋節(jié)的習(xí)俗。文章的要點(diǎn)基本上都已經(jīng)給出了，考生只需要翻譯再做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在選詞的時(shí)候，適當(dāng)?shù)倪x擇一些高級(jí)的詞匯讓文章更有檔次。可以使用一些強(qiáng)調(diào)句，狀語(yǔ)從句等。同時(shí)可以用一些連接詞讓文章更有條理。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)stands for代表；with a long history有很長(zhǎng)的歷史；The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is celebrated only by Chinese people.這個(gè)句子which引導(dǎo)a traditional festival的定語(yǔ)從句；It falls on August 15th of the Chinese lunar year, when people of a family get together and enjoy the dinner together這個(gè)句子when 引導(dǎo)August 15th of the Chinese lunar year的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；

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