Question

20．假定你是李華，你的外籍同學(xué)Jim時(shí)常為中文寫(xiě)作而發(fā)愁并發(fā)來(lái)郵件向你求助．請(qǐng)你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示安慰和鼓勵(lì)；
2．提供幾條提高中文寫(xiě)作能力的建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jim，
I'm sorry to hear that you are troubled by your poor Chinese writing ability．
I'm sorry to hear that you are troubled by your poor Chinese writing ability．I can understand how you feel about it．As we all know，Chinese writing ability plays an important part at school and in life as well．However，there is no need to worry．If you make a determined effort，you will surely improve it．
First of all，read as many Chinese articles as possible．The more you read，the more inspirations you willget．Meanwhile，you will gradually get a good knowledge of the Chinese language．Secondly，form a habit ofcollecting and memorizing beautiful Chinese sentences，which you can use in your writing．Finally，practise writing in Chinese often．As the saying goes，practice makes perfect．
Hope you can make great progress in your Chinese writing．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是李華寫(xiě)給外籍同學(xué)Jim的一封信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一表示安慰和鼓勵(lì)；二提供幾條提高中文寫(xiě)作能力的建議；三表達(dá)希望．高分句型：1．As we all know，Chinese writing ability plays an important part at school and in life as well．句子里As引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，表示"正如"； plays an important part表示"起到重要的作用"；as well表示"也"．正如我們所知，漢語(yǔ)的寫(xiě)作能力在學(xué)校和生活中起到重要的作用．2．Secondly，form a habit of collecting and memorizing beautiful Chinese sentences，which you can use in your writing．句子里，主句是一個(gè)祈使句，以動(dòng)詞原形form開(kāi)頭；which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句里的beautiful Chinese sentences．第二，養(yǎng)成收集和背誦優(yōu)美漢語(yǔ)語(yǔ)句的習(xí)慣，你可以在在寫(xiě)作里運(yùn)用它們．

解答 Dear Jim，
     I'm sorry to hear that you are troubled by your poor Chinese writing ability．I can understand how you feel about it．As we all know，Chinese writing ability plays an important part at school and in life as well．【高分句型一】However，there is no need to worry．If you make a determined effort，you will surely improve it．（表示安慰和鼓勵(lì)）
    First of all，read as many Chinese articles as possible．The more you read，the more inspirations you will get．Meanwhile，you will gradually get a good knowledge of the Chinese language．Secondly，form a habit of collecting and memorizing beautiful Chinese sentences，which you can use in your writing．【高分句型二】Finally，practise writing in Chinese often．As the saying goes，practice makes perfect．（提供幾條提高中文寫(xiě)作能力的建議）
   Hope you can make great progress in your Chinese writing．（表達(dá)希望）
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類(lèi)作文．書(shū)面表達(dá)不僅反映在表達(dá)內(nèi)容上，也反映在書(shū)面形式上．一定要注意單詞拼寫(xiě)正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，字跡工整，卷面力求整潔，正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，使別人看起來(lái)耳目一新，具有整體美感，從而提高自己的得分檔