Question

16．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（Λ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：
    1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
    2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．（請不要在此處作答，否則不給分）
Have you ever had a headache during a test？Have you ever been too worried about something that you have a headache or even can't sleep at night？If so，then you know that stress is．
Not all stress is bad for you．Some kinds of stress can help you get things do better，like when you are running towards the finishing line or when you are being asked to give a speech to your class．Stress sometimes can help push you to make full preparation for a test．However，too much stress can result in anger，depression and other related problems，which we need to take serious．
There are many things in our life what might cause stress------having too much homework，taking a difficult test，and having economic problems．
It's impossible to live in a life completely free of stress，so you should learn to deal with stress．The best way reduce stress is to have a balanced life．If you get enough sleep，eat properly，take more exercise and have enough fun time，you'll probable feel less stressed．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要講述什么是壓力，壓力的類型和如何緩解壓力．作者在文中告訴我們戰(zhàn)勝壓力最好的方式就是保持平衡的生活習(xí)慣，按時休息均衡飲食，堅持鍛煉等．

解答 Have you ever had a headache during a test？Have you ever been tooworried about something that you have a headache or even can't sleep at night？If so，then you know that stress is．
Not all stress is bad for you．Some kinds of stress can help you get things dobetter，like when you are running towards the finishing line or when you are being asked to give a speech to your class．Stress sometimes can help push you to make full preparation for a test．However，too much stress can result in anger，depression and other related problems，which we need to take serious．
There are many things in our life what might cause stress------having too much homework，taking a difficult test，and having economic problems．
It's impossible to live in a life completely free of stress，so you should learn to deal with stress．The best way∧reduce stress is to have a balanced life．If you get enough sleep，eat properly，take more exercise and have enough fun time，you'll probable feel less stressed．
詳解：
1．too改為so 考查固定搭配．so…that…意為"如此/這么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副詞，常常用來修飾形容詞或副詞，常用句型為：主語+謂語+so+adj．/adv．+that從句．
2．that改為what 考查連詞．is缺少表語，用what作其表語，同時引導(dǎo)賓語從句．
3．do改為done 考查過去分詞．get sth．done意為"使某事被做"，主語是人，表示主語請別人幫忙做某事，即主語使某事被別人干，用過去分詞作賓語補足語．
4．去掉when 考查連詞．當(dāng)or連接兩個單句時，為避免重復(fù)，將后一單句中相同的部分省略．
5．preparation改為preparations 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．make preparations意為"作準(zhǔn)備"，是固定搭配．
6．serious改為seriously 考查固定搭配．take…seriously意為"認(rèn)真地對待某人或某事"，是固定搭配．
7．what改為which/that 考查定語從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個定語從句，先行詞many things在從句中作主語，用關(guān)系代詞which/that．what不引導(dǎo)定語從句．
8．去掉in 考查固定搭配．live a life意為"過日子"，是固定搭配．
9．reduce前加to 考查動詞不定式．way后接of介詞短語或動詞不定式短語作定語．
10．probable改為probably 考查副詞．feel是動詞，要用副詞修飾．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．