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【題目】請根據(jù)以下信息，介紹中國的伍迪艾倫——馮小剛。

參考詞匯： 伍迪艾倫Woody Allen 美國著名電影導(dǎo)演 elevate 提升 bankable有票房潛力的

姓名： 馮小剛 出生年月： 1958年3月18日

職業(yè)： 導(dǎo)演，演員 自比美國導(dǎo)演伍迪·艾倫

著名作品：《大腕》"Big Shot's Funeral"；《唐山大地震》"Aftershock"《天下無賊》"A World Without Thieves"

影片介紹：《唐山大地震》總票房收入超過了1億47100萬美元，這創(chuàng)下了中國電影的最高歷史紀(jì)錄，也使馮小剛一躍成為中國最有票房號召力的導(dǎo)演。

觀念： "我覺得，觀眾不是上帝，我們也不是高高在上。我只是覺得，我們都身處在一個(gè)公平競爭的環(huán)境。

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Feng Xiaogang, a famous film director and actor who compares himself to the American director, Woody Allen , was born on March 18th ,1958. He has made many famous films including "Big Shot's Funeral", "Aftershock", "A World Without Thieves" and so on. Of all his films, the disaster movie "Aftershock" took over $147 million at the box office in China , making it the highest grossing film in China’s history . In addition, it also elevated Feng to the position of the most bankable director in China. When interviewed, he said "I don't think that the audience is God. and nor do I think we are above them; I just think that we are on a level playing field."

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