【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

While in London this past weekend I came across a man seating on a bench by himself.I smiled but said hello. He said he was from Birmingham and that I was the only person who has treated him in such a friendly way.In the fact,Birmingham is the largest city which lies near my hometown.He told me that he was in need of money return home.Not knowing how many money I had,I told him I'd give him whatever was on my purse.He prayed I'd have ￡47.When I opened my purse I found I had exact ￡47!I offered the man all of his money.

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【解析】1.句意：我偶然遇見一個(gè)獨(dú)自坐在長(zhǎng)椅上的人，seat作動(dòng)詞時(shí)，表示“向……提供座位，使……就座”，所以要表達(dá)某人落座應(yīng)使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)：sb be seated; 如果一定要使用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，可以用sit這個(gè)詞，故把seating改為sitting或seated.

2.句意：我笑了笑打聲招呼，前后兩個(gè)動(dòng)作是承接的關(guān)系，故將but改為and.

3.根據(jù)句意“He said he was from Birmingham and that I was the only person who has treated him in such a friendly way.他說我是唯一一個(gè)用這樣友好的方式跟他打招呼的人。”，全文用的都是過去時(shí)，且打招呼這個(gè)動(dòng)作又發(fā)生在他說話之前，屬于“過去的過去”，用過去完成時(shí)，故將has改為had.

4.in fact是固定搭配，中間不能加冠詞，故將the去掉.

5.句意：Birmingham是在我家鄉(xiāng)附近最大的城市，這里which后引導(dǎo)的是修飾city的定語(yǔ)從句，又因先行詞中含有最高級(jí)largest，所以不能用which引導(dǎo)，只能用that引導(dǎo)，故將which改為that.

6.句意：他告訴我他需要錢回家，這里賓語(yǔ)從句中出現(xiàn)了兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：was,return，需要將第二個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞變?yōu)榉侵^語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，又根據(jù)句意可知“回家”是目的，所以把return變?yōu)?/span>to do不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)，故在return前加to.

7.money是不可數(shù)名詞，不能用many修飾，故將many改為much.

8.in sb’s purse在某人的錢包里，固定介詞短語(yǔ)搭配，故將on改為in.

9.句意：我發(fā)現(xiàn)正好有47英鎊，這里exact要變?yōu)楦痹~修飾動(dòng)詞had,故將exact改為exactly.

10.句意：我把我所有的錢都給了他，這里的money是“我”的，故將his改為my.

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