Question

假定你是李華，準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校舉辦的主題為“健康成長(zhǎng)”的英語(yǔ)作文比賽。請(qǐng)按要求寫一篇短文，主要內(nèi)容包括：

樂(lè)觀的人生態(tài)度；

努力學(xué)習(xí)；

參加體育鍛煉。

生詞：態(tài)度惡劣attitude

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

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Answer 1

One possible version

We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.

Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power. We can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.

解析:

特點(diǎn)：主題引入自然流暢，能讓學(xué)生迅速進(jìn)入情境，找到感覺(jué)。要點(diǎn)明確，段落清晰；與學(xué)生生活貼近，有話可說(shuō)，有話能說(shuō)。

限定大方向的同時(shí)，給學(xué)生比較充足的聯(lián)想和自由發(fā)揮的空間。

本文主題明確，同時(shí)需要一定的聯(lián)想，難度適中。

文章應(yīng)包含以下要點(diǎn):  1.樂(lè)觀的人生態(tài)度；2.努力學(xué)習(xí)；3.參加體育鍛煉。