Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你班的外籍教師Mr. Smith 即將回國(guó)。他喜歡中國(guó)文化，所以你送他一組中國(guó)剪紙（福、壽、喜）。請(qǐng)寫一封送別信，簡(jiǎn)介禮物寓意，并表達(dá)謝意和祝愿。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 書信的開頭和結(jié)尾以為你寫好。

參考詞匯：1.剪紙paper cuttings; 2.福 Fu；3.壽 Shou；4.喜 Xi

Dear Mr. Smith,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

It is really hard for me to say goodbye to you. I sincerely thank you for your assistance in my study and treasure every moment we spent together on campus. Without your excellent teaching, I wouldn’t have made such great progress in English.

Since you like Chinese traditional culture, I’d like to present you a set of paper cuttings. They are not only traditional decorations but also ancient handicraft arts, which convey good moral meanings. Fu, Shou and Xi represent fortune, long-life or longevity and happiness respectively. These works are really worth collecting.

Thank you again and wish you a pleasant journey. I do hope that our friendship will last forever.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封送別信。試題只給出寫作框架，并未給出所有的具體寫作細(xì)節(jié)，為半開放性寫作。寫好此文，需注意三點(diǎn)：一是寫信格式要準(zhǔn)確，信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，但切要寫好信的結(jié)尾。二是要詳略得當(dāng)，本文應(yīng)重點(diǎn)寫的是簡(jiǎn)介禮物寓意，并表達(dá)謝意和祝愿。三要注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過(guò)渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文是一封書信，格式正確，內(nèi)容符合要求，采用三段式，句中使用高級(jí)句子。It is really hard for me to say goodbye to you.動(dòng)詞不定式作真正的主語(yǔ)；treasure every moment we spent together on campus.省略that的定語(yǔ)從句用在句中；Since you like Chinese traditional culture, I’d like to present you a set of paper cuttings. since引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句；They are not only traditional decorations but also ancient handicraft arts, which convey good moral meanings. not only…but also結(jié)構(gòu)和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句完美結(jié)合；I do hope that our friendship will last forever.強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用堪稱經(jīng)典。