Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如你是中學(xué)生李華，你收到正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的美國(guó)筆友Peter的電子郵件，說(shuō)他在漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中遇到了困難，感到非常著急。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回信并提出建議，幫他來(lái)解決這方面的困難。

1.不要擔(dān)憂，要有信心。

2.給自己更多練習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的機(jī)會(huì)。

3.讓自己浸泡在漢語(yǔ)的環(huán)境當(dāng)中。

要求：1.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 2.詞數(shù)：100詞左右。

3.郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Peter,

I have received your letter.

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

I’m sorry to hear that you are going through a hard time learning Chinese. Now I’m writing to give you some suggestions.

To begin with, don’t be anxious and trust yourself. Chinese is one of the most complex languages in the world, so it’s normal for a beginner to have some trouble. Besides, grab every opportunity to practice using the language. The more you practice, the more fluent you will be in it. Above all, involve yourself in a Chinese environment. Make sure that you are surrounded by books and TV programs in Chinese, and by friends speaking Chinese, which is essential to the learning of any language.

Looking forward to your improvement soon.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文為一封建議信。收到正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的美國(guó)筆友Peter的電子郵件，說(shuō)他在漢語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中遇到了困難，感到非常著急。要求根據(jù)要點(diǎn)給他回信并提出建議，幫他來(lái)解決這方面的困難。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)要求：1.不要擔(dān)憂，要有信心。2.給自己更多練習(xí)漢語(yǔ)的機(jī)會(huì)。3.讓自己浸泡在漢語(yǔ)的環(huán)境當(dāng)中。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本篇要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動(dòng)而流暢，句子簡(jiǎn)潔明了，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：賓語(yǔ)從句that you are going through a hard time learning Chinese和that you are surrounded by books and TV programs in Chinese，不定式to give表目的，定語(yǔ)從句which is essential to the learning of any language. one of句型，The more，The more句型，Looking forward to等詞匯。