Question

我校英語(yǔ)教研組舉行“明星英語(yǔ)教師”評(píng)選活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你寫一篇120詞左右的短文，向英語(yǔ)教研組網(wǎng)頁(yè)投稿，從外表、教學(xué)特色（適當(dāng)舉例）以及學(xué)生對(duì)他的評(píng)價(jià)介紹你喜歡的英語(yǔ)教師林健。短文應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展。（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

外表	1、40歲       2、肩寬體健
教學(xué)特色	1、口語(yǔ)流利   2、愛崗敬業(yè)    3、愛生如子   4、方法多樣   5、幽默詼諧    6、 ……
學(xué)生評(píng)價(jià)	……

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Our English teacher Lin Jian ____________________________________________________

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I strongly recommend him to be the “Star English Teacher”.

Answer 1

Possible version:

Our English teacher Lin Jian is a man about forty years old. His unique well-built body with broad shoulders makes him more like a PE teacher than an English teacher.

       Like many other English teachers, his spoken English is quite fluent. Mr. Lin is devoted to teaching and loves us as if we were his own children. What makes him stand out is that he has a good sense of humor as well as various kinds of teaching methods. He usually takes some of us students as examples, making his lessons interesting and easy to understand. To make sure that everyone goes over his lessons, he will give us a dictation at the beginning of each lesson. While explaining the exercises, he will walk up and down the classroom, checking if everyone has finished. If he catches one, he will pat him/ her affectionately on the head, expressing his regret. So strict with us is he that few in our class are lazy. No wonder that our class always ranks top in different examinations. 

       In a word, Mr. Lin is a worthy teacher, who is highly thought of. I strongly recommend him to be the “Star English Teacher”.