Question

【題目】請(qǐng)觀察所給的圖畫并根據(jù)你對(duì)該圖畫的理解寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，內(nèi)容包括：

（1）簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片，并說明該圖片所揭露的現(xiàn)象；

（2）分析造成該現(xiàn)象的原因（至少兩點(diǎn)）；

（3）提出自己的看法。

要求：1. 詞數(shù)120左右。開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

2. 文章中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。

The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain insight to useful resources and information. However, this is not always the case.

Answer 1

【答案】

As is vividly shown in the picture, a boy is happy with the fact that he can depend on the Internet to finish tasks without any difficulty. It mirrors a common phenomenon. Nowadays, students tend to make use of the Internet to gain information they need.

There are some reasons accounting for it. To begin with, students find it convenient to surf the Internet for useful information, where problems can be solved with the help of several clicks. What’s more, there’s no doubt that the pressure to succeed also causes students to turn to computers for accurate answers. As a result, it’s likely that students will lose interest in studying, which is not beneficial to their overall development.

In my opinion, measures must be taken to solve the problem. Firstly, it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks. Besides, what teachers and parents should do is encourage students to be creative. Finally, doing tasks independently is of great significance.

【解析】

試題分析：請(qǐng)觀察所給的圖畫并根據(jù)你對(duì)該圖畫的理解寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，內(nèi)容包括：（1）簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片，并說明該圖片所揭露的現(xiàn)象；（2）分析造成該現(xiàn)象的原因（至少兩點(diǎn)）；（3）提出自己的看法。要求：1. 詞數(shù)120左右。開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。2. 文章中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫.要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語(yǔ)句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。

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