假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中有10處錯(cuò)誤，要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從11處起)不計(jì)分。

I love camping. It’s my favourite way to spent the summer vacation. Last year, my family and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the most excited experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and went on a long walk every day. We cook over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt so peaceful. It doesn’t cost many to camp, and what I believe it’s the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.

1.把spent改為spend

2.把excited改為exciting

3.把never改為ever

4.把cook改為cooked

5.把wonderfully改為wonderful

6.把or改為and

7.把tree改為 trees

8.把many改為much

9.去掉what

10.加to

【解析】

試題分析：考查短文改錯(cuò)

1.spent改為spend；第二句It’s my favourite way to spent the summer vacation，to后應(yīng)結(jié)動(dòng)詞原形spent是spend的過(guò)去形式，故把spent改為spend

2.excited改為exciting；第四句It was one of the most excited experiences ，excited感到興奮的多用于句型be excited ，exciting令人興奮的這是最令人興奮的經(jīng)歷之一，故把excited改為exciting

3.never改為ever；第四句It was one of the most excited experience I had never had.never是從來(lái)都沒有的意思，ever曾經(jīng)，據(jù)句意為這是我曾有的最讓人激動(dòng)的經(jīng)歷之一，故把never改為ever

4.cook改為cooked；第六句We cook over a fire，全文是過(guò)去的事情，應(yīng)用過(guò)去時(shí)，故把cook改為cooked

5.wonderfully改為wonderful ；第六句food always tasted wonderfully.，taste為連系動(dòng)詞，猴急形容詞，表示嘗起來(lái)….故把wonderfully改為wonderful

6.I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air我看見了美麗的山呼吸了新鮮的空氣，兩者應(yīng)是并列關(guān)系不是選擇關(guān)系，應(yīng)用and表并且，故把or改為and

7.tree改為 trees；第八句I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree，tree是可數(shù)名詞，前面無(wú)數(shù)量詞時(shí)要用復(fù)數(shù)，故把tree改為 trees

8.many改為much；第九句It doesn’t cost many to camp，花費(fèi)錢應(yīng)用much，故把many改為much

9.and what I believe it’s the best way前面已有and連接兩個(gè)句子，就不需要what做領(lǐng)導(dǎo)詞，故去掉what

10.get close nature and enjoy its beauty.，get close to…親近…..固定句型，故加to

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)

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