【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處, 每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧), 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞匯。

2. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處記)不計(jì)分。

When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore. I couldn't understand “real music”· After I graduated from high school, the friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. Here I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my first guitar teacher. There were too many wonderful models to choose that it took me a long time to buy one Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.

【答案】

【小題1】learn---learning

【小題2】Therefore---However

【小題3】the ---a

【小題4】started --start

【小題5】all---both

【小題6】that---which.

【小題7】Here---- There

【小題8】too---so

【小題9】choose后加 from

【小題10】importantly---important

【解析】

【小題1】“花費(fèi)時(shí)間做某事”spend sometime doing something，因此learn---learning

【小題2】盡管“我”很小就開(kāi)始練小提琴，但是當(dāng)時(shí)不懂得真正的音樂(lè)，前后句是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，因果關(guān)系不符合語(yǔ)境，因此Therefore---However。

【小題3】“我的一個(gè)朋友”a friend of mine .表示泛指，定冠詞the ---a 。

【小題4】“建議”后面的賓語(yǔ)從句要用虛擬語(yǔ)氣，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用should+動(dòng)詞原形，should可以省略，因此 started --start 。

【小題5】 這里指“我的朋友和我”是兩個(gè)人，不是指所有人，因此all---both。

【小題6】 先行詞是 day，在定語(yǔ)從句中作賓語(yǔ)，介詞后用which，that---which.

【小題7】在吉他店那里，不是這里，因此Here---- There 。

【小題8】“如此多. . .以至于” so . . . that，因此too---so 。

【小題9】可以從中選擇，缺少介詞from，因此 choose后加 from

【小題10】系動(dòng)詞后用形容詞，importantly---important。

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